The first thing that I noticed in my introduction is that I need a better attention grabber

The first thing that I noticed in my introduction is that I need a better attention grabber. It was good, but there is definitely a better way to get the audience’s attention. The biggest thing in my speech that I noticed the most was the eye contact. I tend to look down at my note cards a lot. I reviewed my speech over and over before I gave it, and almost memorize it. The second thing that caught my attention while watching myself was that I need to have more gestures with my hands. Having a little bit more mobility with my hands will put more emphasis on the things that I am trying to say to the audience. While watching my video I did notice that I was able to understand and clearly know what the main points were. The speech was organized well, so one idea or thought flowed to the next. I thought my tone throughout the speech was good. I spoke in a clear loud tone enough for everyone to hear.